My first commentary (well I guess)

[AcidDark]

could you guys watch my commentary on YouTube and give some feedback? I know its not great but I want to become a good gaming commentator on my shared channel. Any advice etc would be great.

Here is is.



EDIT: Also I'm new to the ME forum just saying

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[WolfensteinenBurger]

Pretty good overall, just practice what you are going to say a few times and try to avoid using um. Also don't forget to add in the game sound at the end. Other than that it was very good.

[MoneyMakinMike]

Good first commentary. Keep em up! I did really enjoy the Mass Effect 3 demo and can't wait to play the full game!

[AcidDark]

Good first commentary. Keep em up! I did really enjoy the Mass Effect 3 demo and can't wait to play the full game!

Thanks for the feedback, it helps alot, if you thought it was good, could you like it when I re-upload it? (I'm reuploading it with the game sound because it didn't upload with it the first time)

Thanks

[AcidDark]

Here is the link, but with game sound

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lX21rOQlnuI

[WolfensteinenBurger]

Good job, and i left a like

[AcidDark]

Good job, and i left a like

Thanks dude, I did notice something myself when re-watching it. I said um/erm quite a bit, I'm going to try and say it at max like 2 times next commentary, rather than trying to go ahead and try not doing it at all. Baby steps lol